I think your advertisement is good and have clear information. It has good vocabulary with many attractive effects. When I listening to the advertisement, I knew that it focuses on one topic. Your voices were well rehearsed and smooth throughout the advertisement. But the volume is hard to hear and doesn’t stay the same all the way. Long’s voice was different volume and may be not fit with Thuy’s voice. But I like the music and sounds. It fit with the setting and topic. It keeps the audience listening and attracts them. The podcast length is also suitable and enough, it makes me doesn’t get boring. :D If I have any suggestion or improvements, it might be like: at the start of the advertisement, you should decrease the shouting or screaming volume. It’s kind of loud, I think. And I just think Long’s voice doesn’t fit to Thuy. :D
That’s it, but I like this advertisement anyway :P
Content: I think your content is good. It has a clear topic and ideas, like what you want to sell. It keeps focus on the topic all the way through the advertisement. It is creative because the part that a man who answer the interview about the shirt, it feels like you are interviewing someone live, real. Your conclusion has summarized your idea, what you want to sell and tell people to buy it.
Delivery: Your delivery is good too. I think it was smooth and effectively while you are advertising. Your talking is rhythm; it shows expressions that keep the audience keep listening. You show an exciting audience who just bought the shirt yesterday. Your grammar is good. It doesn’t have any mistakes at all.
Technical production: Your technical production is not good at all. There are dead spaces between the transitions. After Thuy said the phone number and seventy percent off, Dang continued to say after two seconds .But there is a problem with your volume. Your volume go up and down, it is not equal at all. When people are talking, the volume is normal but the first part, when people are screaming when the ball goal, it is really loud. Your podcast length is fine; it is not long or short.
So overall, I think your advertisement is quiet good. It is effective when you interview someone because it has an opinion of another person to show that the shirt is good. If there is other person opinion, the audience will believe more about the product is good
You should fix your volume at the beginning. It is too loud. And you should also delete the dead space at the end between Thuy when she told the phone number and Dang advised people to buy the shirt.
Content: I think the creativity is great, the ideas are clearly presented. The vocabulary that you used is good, easy to understand. The effects are appropriate, but the one at the beginning was a little confusing. The advertisement focused on the topic of advertising sport shirt the full time through the whole advertisement. The conclusion is clearly summarizes key information by giving the audience where to buy the product and how to contact them. Delivery: The conversation seemed mostly rehearsed, it was smooth and effectively while you are advertising. The talking is rhythm, it shows expressions that make the audience keep listening. You used correct grammar throughout the podcast. Technical Production: The transitions are smooth with a minimum amount of ambient noise because there are dead spaces between them. The volume is acceptable, but at the beginning of the advertisement, the screaming was too loud. Your podcast length keeps the audience interested. Improvement: I think what you should improve on is the volume of the advertisement. As I said above, you should improve on the screaming part at the beginning, it is too loud. And you should try to cut all the dead spaces at the conclusion.
Wow! I really enjoyed the advertisement; I could understand the message clearly and what you guys trying to produce. The content is easy to understand and sticks to the topic all the way through the ad. The effects and the music are great; it makes the video more creative and unique. The advertisement length is also suitable for the advert. I love almost everything except for the last sentence; I think you guys should slow down a little bit.
I think your advertisement is good and have clear information. It has good vocabulary with many attractive effects. When I listening to the advertisement, I knew that it focuses on one topic. Your voices were well rehearsed and smooth throughout the advertisement. But the volume is hard to hear and doesn’t stay the same all the way. Long’s voice was different volume and may be not fit with Thuy’s voice. But I like the music and sounds. It fit with the setting and topic. It keeps the audience listening and attracts them. The podcast length is also suitable and enough, it makes me doesn’t get boring. :D If I have any suggestion or improvements, it might be like: at the start of the advertisement, you should decrease the shouting or screaming volume. It’s kind of loud, I think. And I just think Long’s voice doesn’t fit to Thuy. :D
ReplyDeleteThat’s it, but I like this advertisement anyway :P
Content: I think your content is good. It has a clear topic and ideas, like what you want to sell. It keeps focus on the topic all the way through the advertisement. It is creative because the part that a man who answer the interview about the shirt, it feels like you are interviewing someone live, real. Your conclusion has summarized your idea, what you want to sell and tell people to buy it.
ReplyDeleteDelivery: Your delivery is good too. I think it was smooth and effectively while you are advertising. Your talking is rhythm; it shows expressions that keep the audience keep listening. You show an exciting audience who just bought the shirt yesterday. Your grammar is good. It doesn’t have any mistakes at all.
Technical production: Your technical production is not good at all. There are dead spaces between the transitions. After Thuy said the phone number and seventy percent off, Dang continued to say after two seconds .But there is a problem with your volume. Your volume go up and down, it is not equal at all. When people are talking, the volume is normal but the first part, when people are screaming when the ball goal, it is really loud. Your podcast length is fine; it is not long or short.
So overall, I think your advertisement is quiet good. It is effective when you interview someone because it has an opinion of another person to show that the shirt is good. If there is other person opinion, the audience will believe more about the product is good
You should fix your volume at the beginning. It is too loud. And you should also delete the dead space at the end between Thuy when she told the phone number and Dang advised people to buy the shirt.
I think that’s all I am going to say
Content: I think the creativity is great, the ideas are clearly presented. The vocabulary that you used is good, easy to understand. The effects are appropriate, but the one at the beginning was a little confusing. The advertisement focused on the topic of advertising sport shirt the full time through the whole advertisement. The conclusion is clearly summarizes key information by giving the audience where to buy the product and how to contact them.
ReplyDeleteDelivery: The conversation seemed mostly rehearsed, it was smooth and effectively while you are advertising. The talking is rhythm, it shows expressions that make the audience keep listening. You used correct grammar throughout the podcast.
Technical Production: The transitions are smooth with a minimum amount of ambient noise because there are dead spaces between them. The volume is acceptable, but at the beginning of the advertisement, the screaming was too loud. Your podcast length keeps the audience interested.
Improvement: I think what you should improve on is the volume of the advertisement. As I said above, you should improve on the screaming part at the beginning, it is too loud. And you should try to cut all the dead spaces at the conclusion.
Wow! I really enjoyed the advertisement; I could understand the message clearly and what you guys trying to produce. The content is easy to understand and sticks to the topic all the way through the ad. The effects and the music are great; it makes the video more creative and unique. The advertisement length is also suitable for the advert. I love almost everything except for the last sentence; I think you guys should slow down a little bit.
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